English Story Today

Yes I know that there's the huge probability that no one is reading this cause if you were you'd be insane my now. But it's fun. In English today we had to write a story, a chiller. Mine wasn't very good. I took forever! The beginning lasted 3 pages and I didn't have much time to write anything else, so I crammed the middle and ending in, and I have just realized I did something very stupid. =] I tried to write the speech in an old fashioned sort of way. I meant to write THOSE WHO DARES TO ENTER SHALL SUFFER MY WRATH or something like that. I wrote THOU WHO DARES TO ENTER SHALL SUFFER THY WRATH it sounded cool but meant the complete wrong thing. =] I think it means YOU WHO DARES TO ENTER SHALL SUFFER YOUR WRATH that means the complete wrong thing, I really wasn't thinking, but it is quite funny. Basically it's called the Forbidden Labyrinth, yes it is a Labyrinth. (Hidden in plain sight =]) The ending was crap. The Knight called the Dark Knight of Vedhar appears and is about to do something threatening and it finishes. Not a very interesting ending is it? Once I get it back I'll let you see. But I warn you, it's very long. =] BTW anyone who watches Merlin, will know where I got the name of the Knight from. =] Sorry I love Merlin, yet somebody, whom I am not going to name, thought they were watching Merlin when they were watching the Adventures of Marlin the Fish..... lol oh well.... =]